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Post by Yehoshua Sun Aug 22, 2010 12:36 pm

“Storm”
The thunder rumbled,
Sky is dreary, black, and dark—
And round raindrops pour.

“Rest”

First a
Butterfly goes
To a leaf and there it
Rests it beautiful self and then
It leaves.

“The Wish”

One day I was out, I looked in the air,
And thought of how I’d like to be tere.
To soar above the world so high
And never have a worry, oh my!
But my life was confined to this earth—
Mortal things like home and hearth.

Howe’er, something started changing on me
And I became as small as a mouse could be;
But my size was changing, so was myself!
Then I was a bird the size of an elf.
Was I dreaming? Surely not!
Becoming a bird, was this my lot?

A little voice inside me—my head:
A life of a bird from now (he said)
Is what you’ll live—it was your wish.
No, I cried. Never to live or eat from a dish?
I would rather die than live like this
The mortal life I’d surely miss.

Sadly, slowly, I opened my wings
And I found no pleasure in flying.
I’d left the world I knew behind
To go and seek; new worlds to find.
My life had been left on the ground
Left....until it was found.
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Post by Hadar Tue Aug 24, 2010 11:33 am

You already know my opinion, Josh. Very Happy I like The Wish alot.
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Post by Yehoshua Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:15 pm

Yes, I know yours. And I agree with it!
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Post by FiddleRose Tue Aug 24, 2010 3:25 pm

Nice poems! I like the last one the best. Very Happy
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Post by ric Wed Aug 25, 2010 12:29 pm

Ya, those are great!
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Post by Yehoshua Wed Aug 25, 2010 12:56 pm

Seems everyone likes the Wish best. Thanks. Very Happy
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Post by Pyro Maelstrom Wed Aug 25, 2010 1:21 pm

The Wish was/is my favorite. Nice job kid!
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Post by Cal jordon Wed Aug 25, 2010 2:59 pm

the Japanese short one are a little abrupt.
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